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01/23/2018

I want to see characters that ARE WHO THEY ARE.

Despite their pasts.

Not because of them.

I see too many writers coming up with elaborate backstories to explain away every single aspect of their character's personality. Tell me, what are those characters without their pasts? Do they own nothing of their own personality? Are they blank slates colored only by experience?

No. Personality formation is a combination of inherent inclination and learned thought processes (the result of backstory). Beyond that, the effects of our experiences are rarely straightforward, and two people will be shaped by the same experiences in vastly different ways.

So find how your character's personality defies their backstory. Take every learning experience and get serious about figuring out the unexpected ways it shaped them.

Have fun making your character their own person.

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"Not just any decision qualifies as inner conflict. Inner conflict needs to do more than make your character stop and sc...
11/10/2015

"Not just any decision qualifies as inner conflict. Inner conflict needs to do more than make your character stop and scratch his head. It needs to throw him back on his heels.

"It has to be a choice he would never make if given half a chance."

Anoint Your Character with Inner Conflict, A Master Technique
http://www.writingeekery.com/inner-conflict/

The Four Cornerstones of Strong Characters [FULL ARTICLE]Truly strong characters are complex enough to carry the story, ...
09/02/2015

The Four Cornerstones of Strong Characters [FULL ARTICLE]

Truly strong characters are complex enough to carry the story, pull in the reader, and give a sense that there’s more going on under the surface. It’s not about being tough. It’s about being well-written.

Plot can springboard off of a strong character from various “soft spots” engineered specifically to propel it forward. Those soft spots are nestled in the cornerstones.

The Four Cornerstones are:
The Fear, the Secret, the Flaw, and the Quirk.

The cornerstones are the foundation, just the beginning. But…

By defining these simple aspects first, you can watch your story unfold in the potential interactions and consequences. They can aid the establishment of character dynamics and plot evolution. And they work in conjunction with the pillars of strong characters to create a realistic and story-appropriate character. It’s easier to change things around when you’re working with four clearly defined aspects of your character, especially if you start with this framework.

As a guideline, major characters should have a strong foundation, using two to four of the cornerstones. Minor characters generally need one to two. One time, “flit in, flit out” characters are made more interesting by using one, but it must be done with taste. Main characters are best served if they have all four.

Shall we get to it, then?

FEAR:

Fear determines the course of the story. It sits at the root of stakes, which are the propulsion unit of any plot. Without fear to motivate him, readers question why the main character wouldn’t just ignore the problem. James Scott Bell makes the case that the fear driving the story should be nothing less than death.

"The stakes of a story must be DEATH. There are three kinds of death: physical, professional and psychological/spiritual. The core issue in your novel has to be one of these or the book will not be the best it can be."

High stakes are a staple of good storytelling. Ask Kristen Lamb or Larry Brooks or K.M. Weiland.

And high stakes are based on fear.

Minor characters’ fears can change the course of a story as well. Perhaps the guard froze, allowing the princess to be kidnapped.

…And Mario is off to save her again.

SECRET:

“Everyone is a moon and has a dark side which he never shows to anybody.”
– Mark Twain

What does your character have to hide? How does it clash with external events?

A secret adds drama while paving the way through inner conflict – one of the pillars of strong characters – straight to subtext. There are other ways to get both, but the lure of a secret is strong. Readers like either being in on or trying to figure out a secret.

What a character hides gives a strong clue about the rest of their personality or story, even if the secret is as minor as what he had for lunch.

He might be on a special diet for his health, but he would rather live freely and die young. Or he might be limited by a professed religion, but he’s really trying to infiltrate an enemy stronghold.

You probably already grasped from the last example that large secrets tend to spawn smaller secrets. But it might be presented to the reader in reverse, if he’s had it all along. Of course, your character’s secret doesn’t have to exist from the beginning of the story. He might pick it up along the way.

FLAW:

What kind of mistakes does your character make? What kind of circumstances cause the flaw to surface?

Avoid single word flaws. He’s impulsive. Alright, how impulsive? When is he impulsive? What is he impulsive about? He might impulsively try to encourage people, or he might impulsively get into duels. I’m looking straight at you, d’Artagnan.

If it’s not specific, it’s just a meaningless label. A specific flaw is easier to show. It’s easier to see when it would rightfully be triggered.

However, you have to balance how often it’s triggered with the severity of the flaw so it doesn’t overwhelm the story.

Fear only counts as a flaw if taken to the extreme. A character with a phobia can make mistakes because of clouded judgment.

QUIRK:

A quirk might seem extraneous at first glance, but that gives it extra clout in its real mission: to create symbolism for the character theme.

A character’s quirk can be a window to the world you’re creating. A fantasy character can’t be picky about M&Ms, but she might refuse to ride any horse that isn’t pure white.

Ultimately, there are two types of quirk: the foundational quirk and the trivial quirk. A trivial quirk has no meaning behind it. A foundational quirk can tell you much, even the class, attitude, and self-concept of a character.

When defining your quirk, again, you should be specific rather than vague. Know when it’s triggered so you don’t use it when it wouldn’t be.

Quirks are one of the easiest things to overdo. In fact, you’ll probably want to go back and edit out some of the quirky incidents that arise in your first draft. That’s pretty standard.

Make the Process Your Own

A framework for understanding great characters... you can take it deep or just use it as a checklist.There are many methods for character creation. None are wrong.

It’s the finished product that counts. You can use this framework as a map in your initial effort, or as a checklist to make sure that your character is fully formed. It’s completely up to you.

If you'd like the links to dig deeper into each cornerstone, head to:
http://www.writingeekery.com/four-cornerstones-of-strong-characters/

08/01/2015

I'm LIVE BLOGGING a 24-hour challenge to get The Perfection Intervention written. This is spur of the moment. This is nuts.

7:46 Stretch break! If I don’t move right this moment I might turn into a petrified statue. The book would not get done and my cat would not get fed. (You KNOW which is the worse travesty.)

Live blogging my insane attempt to write a short book in 24 hours.

Quick Overview:The 5 Absolute Dimensions of Character PersonalityIt's easy to rely on the outward things to let you know...
07/14/2015

Quick Overview:
The 5 Absolute Dimensions of Character Personality

It's easy to rely on the outward things to let you know who a character is. After all, that's how we get to know people in real life. But.

If you're struggling to breathe life into a character, they're probably lacking in one of the dimensions, and you need to go deeper.

It doesn't matter if you're looking at your character's stuff, or their situation, or their backstory. That's outward, not part of who they really are. There's more to them. We have our own temperaments by the time we're three months old (or earlier)...

We have mental, emotional, and social predispositions, not dependent on anything outside of us. The dimensions can help you look deeper to find them.

Estimated reading time: 4 minutes

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5 common issues, including one no one talks about.A process for minimal stress.And first line dissections. (Especially g...
05/10/2015

5 common issues, including one no one talks about.
A process for minimal stress.
And first line dissections.

(Especially good for fantasy writers.)

Est. reading time: 8 minutes.

The first chapter is the doorway to your story. Tempt your reader to cross the threshold. I'll show you how.

02/26/2015

WHAT I'VE BEEN UP TO
MJ reporting in...
I haven't been idle while I've been silent.

A few months ago I embarked on a journey of recovering from burnout. That meant relearning how to follow my flow and work on what I had insight on that day. I had too highly prized my "priorities" and forgotten that I'm an Integrative Thinker and need to follow my train of thought through all the connections it makes as it builds a fortress of doing.

If that doesn't make sense to you, imagine a single ray of light. When it hits a prism, it splits and takes off in another direction. When my ray of insight hits something, suddenly I see how it affects other things, and I need to follow those new directions before coming back to the original with more insight. Everything I do is interconnected. (Although sometimes the connections are subconscious and I have to just trust that what is coming easiest is the best course.)

In case you couldn't guess from that, I'm an intuitive. ;)

All that is to say... my flow has lead me to some interesting decisions.

Now I'm eyes deep in re-envisioning my editing process to make it more effective with techniques stolen from great teachers and psychology. It's a massive undertaking. The goal is a highly structured process broken into the easiest steps possible while still giving full context for why we're working on the area we are. The insights will be the same, but they will be delivered in a way that should invigorate and motivate. It's a lot of work, but it will be worth it. It even has a special name. ;D

I'm also about to announce a special one-on-one character refinement session. (SHH!) I've been working on a framework for understanding character personalities at the next level. And I want to hug it. Seriously, it has completely changed how I look at characters. 5 Absolute Dimensions encompassing eveything about a character's personality. ::happydance:: I love new knowledge. LOVE IT. Especially when it's so eminently applicable and opens up so much possibility for uniqueness. ::dreamysigh::

What else? Editing for existing clients, of course.

Oh, and a manifesto. Yes, loving that. So many TRUTHS that need to come out and play, giving life to writing and writing processes. Yum.

YOUR TURN.
What have you been up to? What's your WIP?

Marginalized characters is a topic I haven't tackled, and Skye's guest poster Wendy Lu gives three uber-practical tips. ...
02/12/2015

Marginalized characters is a topic I haven't tackled, and Skye's guest poster Wendy Lu gives three uber-practical tips.

Do you consider the privilege and marginalization of your characters as you create them?

As writers, we have the ability to create any character we want in our stories. Whether it’s a lumberjack with one eye or a traveling physician with a fear of airplanes, we have the creative power to choose what personality quirks and details about their backstory make them who they are. Don’t like the one eye for your lumberjack? You can toss the idea and give him a scar instead. [ 1119 more words. ]

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