P.R. Bunke

P.R. Bunke Online freelance editorial services. Professional content, line, and copyediting, priced for first-time writers. Comprehensive, gentle, and organic!

After four years of college and eight total years of manuscript reviews, writing groups, cover letters, emails to editors, workshops, critiques, rants, and gaping late-night plot holes, I've struck out on my own as a freelance editor. Every adventure starts with a single sentence (if you can challenge me on that one, bring it on!) and I would love to help you bring yours to life. For reviews from

clients, more background information, and yet another blurb, please check out my Upwork profile:

https://www.upwork.com/fl/phoenixbunke

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Developmental editing--You've finished your novel, and now you want to find out if it's any good--yes, your mother loves you, and yes, you do need to get somebody else's opinion too. During developmental, or content, editing, I take a look at the overall shape of your plot and your characters and give you an honest dissection of the good and the bad. You will get your manuscript back, sometimes with notes, and a lengthy editor's letter detailing what went right, what went wrong, and suggestions on how to improve. Beta reading--You love your characters so much that you sometimes dream about them. Now it's time to see if your audience feels the same way! Beta reading is similar to developmental editing, but it focuses on the reader experience rather than the technical details. I will read the manuscript, sometimes add comments, and send you a beta letter telling you who I liked, when I cried, what moments fell flat to me, what confused me, and what made my heart race. And I can also recommend other great betas if you want a second or third opinion. Line editing--You're pretty solid about your plot and characters, but you want to make sure each scene's action flows and each line of dialogue makes sense. This is when you need line editing, which is a comprehensive review of the smaller-picture pieces of your manuscript. I can make suggested changes to each sentence that you will be able to accept or reject; or, I can add line-by-line critiques via comments on MS Word. Either way, line editing can take a manuscript from great to amazing. Proofreading/copyediting--When you're just about ready to submit your manuscript to agents, publishers, CreateSpace or Smashwords, it's time for a final review of your apostrophes, em dashes, spelling, grammar, and usage. There are slight differences between these two types of editing, but I can do both. In most cases, I will review every word of your novel, fix errors and query you on uncertainties, and create a stylesheet to record usage details specific to your manuscript. Then I'll run spellcheck, and when it doesn't recognize your neologisms, I will gracefully ignore it. Outline development--Before you write 100,000 words, send it to an editor,and then have to change 50,000 of them, consider hiring me to discuss your next planned novel! Let's talk about ideas, review outlines for plot holes, and discover what your characters' true motivations are. Having an editor look over your preliminary work can save you time and money in the long publishing process.

Free cyberpunk book, anyone? My client Eric Malikyte has arcs of Ego Trip available and the cover looks AMAZING. Note I ...
05/12/2020

Free cyberpunk book, anyone? My client Eric Malikyte has arcs of Ego Trip available and the cover looks AMAZING. Note I didn't edit this so I actually haven't read it--just downloaded my copy :)

For Paul Anderson Fou , fast food worker and professional underachiever, life is about to get a whole lot more interesting. He's been given the opportunity of a lifetime by a woman with spiked neon hair and glowing, multicolored eyes who calls herself Dynamo. After obtaining a full immersion VR impl...

Eric is one of the most hardworking writers I've met and it's paying off in better and better prose. If any of you can h...
08/12/2019

Eric is one of the most hardworking writers I've met and it's paying off in better and better prose. If any of you can help make this book a reality, it would be deeply appreciated.

Some of you may know that I hired an artist a few months back to produce a cover for Mind's Horizon (my second novel). The artist decided not to finish the project. I paid him in full, and the cover was nearly finished (pictured in the featured image here), but he decided that not only would he not....

Hey look! It's a review of Echoes of Olympus Mons! It's great to see this project finally out in the wild being read by ...
04/12/2019

Hey look! It's a review of Echoes of Olympus Mons! It's great to see this project finally out in the wild being read by people (and perplexing and terrifying them) as it should be. I'm proud to have worked on developmental, line, and copyedits on this book and to have watched it transform into the cinematic sci-fi horror tale it's become.

of one of the finest science fictions to come across our desk in a while. Echoes of Olymous Mons by
https://www.madoverbooks.com/book-reviews/echoes-olympus-mons/
An absolute thriller.

This writer keeps making my day.
04/11/2019

This writer keeps making my day.

This song makes me feel like a supervillain. Mwahaha.
04/04/2019

This song makes me feel like a supervillain. Mwahaha.

It's always lovely to see pieces I've edited out in the world, getting read and shared! I don't talk much about nonficti...
03/06/2019

It's always lovely to see pieces I've edited out in the world, getting read and shared! I don't talk much about nonfiction editing, but I've very much enjoyed working on this set of inspirational writings.

02/28/2019

Guess who's renting a domain name for a new writing-related project that will be revealed in the next few months...

It's kind of cozy sitting here editing literature and drinking tea while the snow piles up outside...
02/21/2019

It's kind of cozy sitting here editing literature and drinking tea while the snow piles up outside...

Say hello to this gorgeous new blog header by Quentin Burns, who is the most extraordinary artist. (Butchered slightly i...
02/18/2019

Say hello to this gorgeous new blog header by Quentin Burns, who is the most extraordinary artist. (Butchered slightly in Gimp by me.)

Just a normal day working on the blog, everyone.
02/16/2019

Just a normal day working on the blog, everyone.

Sitting inside here in the Boulder winter DOES kind of make me miss the home office at my parents' place in So Cal...
02/14/2019

Sitting inside here in the Boulder winter DOES kind of make me miss the home office at my parents' place in So Cal...

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