09/06/2025
Here is an excerpt from my young adult/adventure/horror novel "The Goatman." Goatman's was a real place just outside the outskirts of Corpus Christi, TX, where I once lived. From what I remember about it, it seemed to be a long abandoned ranch/shooting range/resort and it was supposedly haunted by The Goatman, which was said to be a creature that was half man and half goat. I wanted to write a novel similar in vein to the movie "Stand by Me," which was based on Stephen King's novella "The Body" by combining a young adult novel filled with the magic of being a kid while also adding a horror element, plus bringing in Goatman's as the main place where everything takes place. In this particular excerpt the main character Danny, who is a thirteen year-old boy, is being chased by a large man that he and his friends have discovered has been kidnapping kids around the neighborhood and bringing them to Goatman's. The large man - Gordon - is about to capture him and then, at that moment, the Goatman appears from out of the darkness and rescues him by killing Gordon. This is the only time that anyone has ever seen The Goatman:
Gordon bent toward me with his giant hands open and I closed my eyes.
Then I heard some frantic wrestling of the weeds.
“Auuuuggghhhhhhiiiiiiiiiee!”
The scream was so blood-curdling and so laced with pain and agony, I almost thought that…well, I didn’t know what to think because I had never heard anything like it in my entire life. I’m glad that I hadn’t because it was the kind of scream that could pe*****te a person’s senses and haunt them for years to come. I opened my eyes and looked up. At first, I didn’t know what I was looking at, and I had to keep myself from blinking because my mind was telling me to shut my eyes, but I was willing them to stay open because I could not tear them away from what was in front of me.
Something had Gordon.
He was fighting to get out of the grip of something that was even bigger than he was, and I saw that his feet were dangling off the ground. I quickly tried to think of something that could lift a guy who looked to be at least two hundred and twenty pounds like he was nothing off the ground and nothing came to mind.
I looked at what was wrapped around Gordon.
Two monstrously muscled arms that looked to be covered with some kind of white fur were gripping him. Gordon was savagely trying to free himself from the arms and pounding on them, shaking his entire body, trying to get free, and the arms still held him steadfast. I saw them tighten around him, and in the silence of the night heard the sound of Gordon’s ribs snapping and popping and his agonizing screams as they did. I was so frozen with fear and mesmerized with what was happening right in front of me, even if I had thought of getting up and running away, I don’t think I would have been able to do so.
My eyes looked upward, and I saw something that actually made me gasp.
Up above Gordon, I could see the head of whatever it was that was holding him and slowly squeezing him to death.
It was the giant head of a goat.
Even as I was seeing it, I couldn’t believe it. I know that it was dark outside with very little light, but it was a real head of a goat. There was no way a mask could be that realistic, I don’t care how many good make-up people live in Hollywood. The goat’s head had a weird quality to it, as though it were…blended with something. That’s when I realized what it was – it was also the face of a human being because the dark eyes looked totally human. As monstrous as the face was, the eyes had a quality that could only be found in a human being. I don’t know if you would call it intelligence because he also had the look of a wild, savage animal, but there was definitely something human there. There was also a pair of giant, brown swirled horns on his head that curled at the tips, and it was only then that I smelled that familiar scent that I had smelled all through the day at certain places.
It dawned on me with alarming suddenness what I was looking at.
The Goatman.
He was real.
He was real, and he was standing right before me. Even more than that, he was saving me.
With a savage grunt, he pulled Gordon into the weeds and disappeared. Everything was silent for a moment.
Then, the weeds started rustling again in a torrent, and I heard more snapping of bones and Gordon’s screams. I knew with certainty that he was dying. A person could only make inhuman noises like that when they were being faced with imminent death and they could not do anything about it. It made me think of an image of someone who was literally being slowly pulled apart while every bone in his body was being crushed at the same time, and even that would not begin to really describe it.
Even after all the things that he had done and everything that he had put me through, I could not help but feel sorry for him, and I started crying as I heard what I knew were going to be his final screams.
Then there was silence. I lay there, afraid to get up, afraid to even move. I noticed that even the crickets were now quiet. It was the most utterly, completely silent moment of my life. I didn’t think it was possible for the world to be this quiet. I wondered if this was what an astronaut felt like when he was drifting in space and for a brief moment had a portion of the universe all to himself. The weeds started to rustle again, and I kicked away not sure what to expect.
The figure emerged from the weeds again and stood before me. He appeared to be at least seven feet tall. With Gordon no longer blocking him from view, I was able to see his full body. His head and arms were just as I described but even more ominous in appearance since I could see them in full view. His chest was enormous and looked like the body of a man and covered with what looked to be hair. Not wool or anything small and curly, but white, fine hair. Further down below his waist, his body began to transform into something resembling an animal, and the hair began to become darker and coarser. His legs were incredibly huge, too huge to be just legs. That’s when I realized that they were not just legs; they were haunches. They looked so powerful and so muscular; it would not have surprised me if the figure before me was capable of running a hundred miles an hour. It was difficult to tell in the dark…but I think his feet were huge, black hooves. I thought how impossible that must be to be able to support a body that large with just a pair of hooves, no matter how large and spread-out they were.
Not knowing what to do, I just stayed there on the ground as if I were paralyzed and looked up at him while holding my breath, not able to take my eyes from him.
We stayed there, staring at each other, for what seemed like a small eternity.
Then, with a small movement of his head as if he were saying, “You’re welcome,” he turned back around to the weeds and disappeared into them. I heard them rustling for a while as the figure was moving through them, and it gradually dimmed until I could not hear anything at all except for some crickets that had apparently decided it was once again time to take up their never-ending symphony.
He was gone.
Just as suddenly as he had appeared, he had vanished. Still trying to understand and comprehend what I had seen and now realizing that I was actually still alive, I slowly got up and walked over to where the Goatman had been standing.
Two giant hoof prints were barely visible in what little light was coming from the barn. I looked into the wall of weeds and almost thought of running after him to…I don’t know, thank him, I suppose. But I also knew that it would be a waste of time because I would never see him again. For all I knew, I was the only person who had actually ever seen him. This was his home, and it had been invaded. He had done what he had to do to set things to right, and saving me had been part of what needed to happen, no more. Still, I was grateful to him, and I owed my life to him because I would certainly be dead right now if he had not chosen to appear. I would repay him by respecting his wishes to be left alone and let him live in peace.
I slowly got up, walked back to the barn and into the much welcome light as I entered the doorway.
I would be interested in selling the film rights to a major studio or streaming service.